Write a Long Dark Haiku


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Hey survivors, I thought I'd experiment with a little game-inspired haiku. Not exactly a born-poet here -- why not keep me company and add your own? ;)

The crunching of snow
Soft solitude falls in flakes
I breath a tired sigh

or

Find a frozen corpse
With both delight and despair
Moldy candy bar

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25 minutes ago, Mel Guille said:

Hey survivors, I thought I'd experiment with a little game-inspired haiku. Not exactly a born-poet here -- why not keep me company and add your own? ;)

The crunching of snow
Soft solitude falls in flakes
I breath a tired sigh

or

Find a frozen corpse
With both delight and despair
Moldy candy bar

How did you get your single line spacing? 

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Gently bobs my float
Light dances on the water
The trout won’t bite though

 

The trees look all grey
A sea of fog cloaks the woods
Each step silence grows

 

Cold creeps up the bones
‘A little rest could not hurt’

The void reels me in

 

A wet sleeping bag
Hail and snow pummel the skin
Was it worth the risk?

Fingers growing numb
Can't even feel that trigger
A wolf has a meal

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