alone sniper Posted September 7, 2016 Share Posted September 7, 2016 Hi guys !!! How you doing ? I working on a novel. I get inspired by TLD !!!! I Should Thank my friend who helped me !!! @Wastelander @Baukster77 I will edit this whenever I can !!! So don't forget to check it out !!! (I will do my best but it might have a typo !! ) I hope you enjoy it !!! Don't forget to comment your idea about it !!!!!!! The Survivor The sun was setting slowly, as little snowflakes came falling from the sky. Young teen was running through the streets. He suddenly stopped in front of a dilapidated apartment building. He looked around, but there was nobody there. He took a deep breath and looked at the building, it used to be one of the biggest buildings of the neighborhood. But that was before the earthquake happened. Now it was just a death trap. The earthquake destroyed the entrance, and the building was not accessible. He walked around the back of the building. There was a small old metal fire escape ladder at the back of building. After double checking his backpack (today was a good day!! He found a tuna can !!!) he started to climb ladder . Arash climbed up the ladder. and after fifty steps later he was at the rooftop. There was a big hole in the roof, and on the other side of the roof there was a door that led to fifth floor. Arash stepped on a plank that was laid over the hole. He tried to keep his head up - the hole was about six meters deep.... He finally reached the door and opened it, not before watching the sunset for a second. "Well, one good day's about to finish" he whispered. After a few minutes He entered the house from the rooftop door. A big part of the staircase had collapsed about a year ago. so he walked carefully to the fifth floor. There was a lot of stuff on the floor, but the usable stuff he had taken a month ago. He sat by the big hole and jumped to the fourth floor. This floor was full of stuff, which made walking pretty hard. It took some time for Arash to get to the door. "Never gets easier" Arash said. He got out of the house and climbed down the stairs until he reached to old wrecked door on the third floor. He tried to open the door but it didn't open. "Come on!! It's going to get worse day by day !!!! " Arash said Impatiently. finally he busted the door down. The door landed on the floor. Arash tried to keep his calm. He entered the house and put his backpack on the ground, lifted the door to its place. after that he looked at his semi-wrecked house. . . . * : Arash is a Persian name http://www.behindthename.com/name/arash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bujkelly Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 This story is really went written and the use of language is great, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alone sniper Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 3 minutes ago, bujkelly said: This story is really went written and the use of language is great, keep it up! I will post the new part ... tomorrow !!!!!!!! And Thanks for comment !!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wastelander Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 I said it in our PMs already, but I'll release it to the public here: Nice to see a story that goes off the beaten path and takes place in a different location Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alone sniper Posted September 13, 2016 Author Share Posted September 13, 2016 Sorry about it. But .... The story won't update Until further notice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tbone555 Posted October 9, 2016 Share Posted October 9, 2016 this is very well written, man, and i hope to see more one of these days! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alone sniper Posted October 9, 2016 Author Share Posted October 9, 2016 3 hours ago, Tbone555 said: this is very well written, man, and i hope to see more one of these days! Thanks mate ! But unfortunatly I can't Countinue This right now. But i Will do it one day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
romerabr Posted October 10, 2016 Share Posted October 10, 2016 7 hours ago, alone sniper said: But unfortunatly I can't Countinue This right now. But i Will do it one day Really sad about it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alone sniper Posted October 13, 2016 Author Share Posted October 13, 2016 On 10/10/2016 at 4:26 AM, romerabr said: Really sad about it... Don't be !! I will continue it one day ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alone sniper Posted October 14, 2017 Author Share Posted October 14, 2017 I think i probably gonna continue it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
romerabr Posted October 15, 2017 Share Posted October 15, 2017 21 hours ago, alone sniper said: I think i probably gonna continue it soon. Great news. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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